WALT use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.
On Saturday afternoon.
On Saturday afternoon me and my family went to Palmerston North and from there we went to a swimming place called Lido. First me and mum went to the green and white slide.
It was so fast and me and my mum screamed but it was very fun when we went there again because on the second time we were used to it.
Then me and my dad went down and I did not scream but my dad did. It was very loud. After that I saw a very steep slide so I went down and when I went down I bit my bottom lip because I was very scared.
Then we went to the water park. There was water all over and there was a little water slide.
I really enjoyed my day. It was awesome.



