My Treaty of Waitangi video

I have been learning to use Explain Everything to record and share my ideas about the Treaty of Waitangi.

Recount Writing-My draft copy

I am learning to make my writing more interesting for my readers.
This is the draft copy of my writing

Recount Writing-At the Park

I am learning to make my writing more interesting for my readers.

This is the published copy of my writing

On Saturday afternoon, I went to the park.  

First, I went on the bumpy slide. 
It was really bumpy.  

I giggled until we got to the bottom.  

Next, I went on the slippery monkey bars.  

They made me slip off.  

Then I went on the wobbly bridge. 
It was so wobbly I almost fell all the
way on the ground.  

Finally, my mum took me home.  I felt joyful.  

The Treaty of Waitangi

WALT write our ideas about the Treaty of Waitangi.

The Treaty Of Waitangi

First, the Maori were in NZ.

Next, the Pakeha came to NZ.

Then they started to fight.

So the Maori chiefs sent 

the king a note.

The King sent William Hobson

and James Busby to help.

They talked to the chiefs.

Then they wrote the Treaty.

Then they went around 

Letting the chiefs sign the Treaty.

They all agreed to take care of NZ.

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